Introduction
This essay undertakes a rhetorical analysis of Jeremy Rifkin’s article “A Change of Heart about Animals,” published in the Los Angeles Times on September 1, 2003, with a targeted audience of general readers and policymakers interested in animal rights and ethics. Rifkin’s main claim is that scientific evidence increasingly demonstrates animals’ capacity for emotions, self-awareness, and complex behaviors, necessitating a reevaluation of how society treats them. Using a rhetorical precis, Rifkin argues in his editorial piece that animals share emotional and cognitive similarities with humans, supported by emerging studies, intending to persuade readers to adopt a more compassionate stance towards non-human creatures. This analysis will focus on Rifkin’s use of rhetorical strategies, specifically his appeals to pathos and logos, to evaluate the overall effectiveness of his argument. My thesis posits that while Rifkin’s text is moderately effective in engaging readers emotionally through pathos, his reliance on selective evidence for logos weakens the persuasiveness of his case for a broad audience.
Summary of Rifkin’s Argument
Rifkin’s central argument in “A Change of Heart about Animals” revolves around the idea that animals possess emotional depth and intellectual capacities akin to humans, challenging traditional views that deny them such attributes. He cites various scientific studies to support this claim, such as research showing pigs craving affection, gorillas learning sign language, and elephants exhibiting grief. Rifkin suggests that these findings mirror human behaviors, urging society to reconsider ethical obligations towards animals. He further implies that industries exploiting animals, such as factory farming and scientific testing, must adapt to this new understanding, proposing a shift in policy and cultural attitudes. This argument sets the stage for analyzing how Rifkin employs rhetorical appeals to convince his audience of the need for change.
Appeal to Pathos: Emotional Engagement
One of Rifkin’s primary strategies is his appeal to pathos, aiming to evoke empathy and emotional connection in his readers. He uses vivid examples to humanize animals, such as when he describes elephants mourning their dead, stating, “Studies on elephants have shown that they, too, experience grief, shedding tears and engaging in burial rituals for their dead” (Rifkin, 2003). Labelled as a clear appeal to pathos, this imagery invites readers to imagine the depth of an elephant’s sorrow, a sentiment typically reserved for humans. This strategy is effective because it taps into universal feelings of loss and empathy; most readers can relate to grief, making the plight of animals more personal and urgent. The emotional impact likely prompts readers to question the morality of harming creatures capable of such feelings, thereby strengthening Rifkin’s case. However, if this passage were altered to a more clinical description, such as merely stating that elephants display certain behaviors after death, the emotional resonance would diminish, potentially reducing the text’s persuasive power. Thus, Rifkin’s use of pathos here generally succeeds in fostering an emotional bond with the audience, though it may not sway those prioritizing rational over sentimental arguments.
Appeal to Logos: Logical Reasoning and Evidence
Rifkin also employs an appeal to logos by presenting scientific evidence to support his claims about animal cognition and emotion. For instance, he references specific studies, noting, “Researchers at Purdue University have found that pigs crave affection and are easily depressed if isolated or denied playtime with each other” (Rifkin, 2003). Identified as an appeal to logos, this example aims to provide a factual basis for his argument, appealing to readers who value empirical data. On the surface, this strategy appears effective, as it grounds Rifkin’s emotional claims in science, potentially convincing skeptics of animals’ complex inner lives. However, a deeper analysis reveals limitations; Rifkin selectively chooses studies that align with his perspective without addressing counterarguments or the broader scientific debate on animal consciousness. This selective presentation may lead critical readers to question the reliability of his evidence, wondering whether opposing research exists that he omits. Consequently, while this appeal to logos supports his argument for a sympathetic audience, it is less effective for those who demand a balanced, comprehensive examination of data. If Rifkin had included dissenting views or acknowledged the tentative nature of some findings, his logical appeal might have been more robust, enhancing the text’s credibility across a wider readership.
Overall Evaluation of Text Effectiveness
Evaluating the overall effectiveness of Rifkin’s rhetorical strategies, it is evident that his combination of pathos and logos creates a moderately compelling argument, though with notable shortcomings. The emotional appeals, such as the portrayal of grieving elephants, are arguably the strongest aspect of his text, likely resonating with a general audience inclined towards compassion. Indeed, these descriptions evoke a visceral response that can shift perspectives on animal treatment. Conversely, his logical appeals, while providing some scientific backing, fall short due to their selective nature, potentially alienating readers who prioritize rigorous, balanced evidence. Furthermore, Rifkin’s lack of counterarguments or acknowledgment of ethical complexities—such as economic implications of changing animal treatment policies—limits the depth of his persuasiveness. Therefore, while the text succeeds in raising awareness and stirring emotion, its effectiveness as a fully persuasive argument is constrained, particularly for a more critical or academically inclined audience seeking comprehensive debate.
Conclusion
In conclusion, Jeremy Rifkin’s “A Change of Heart about Animals” employs rhetorical strategies of pathos and logos to advocate for a reconsideration of society’s treatment of animals, achieving moderate success. His emotional appeals effectively engage readers by humanizing animals, while his logical appeals provide a factual basis that is, however, undermined by selectivity and omission of opposing views. Reflecting on this analysis, the text has influenced my perspective by highlighting the emotional capacities of animals, prompting me to question previously held assumptions about their role in human life. Nevertheless, it also underscores the importance of critical evaluation of evidence in forming ethical stances. Ultimately, Rifkin’s work serves as a catalyst for discussion on animal rights, though its impact might be greater with a more balanced approach to evidence and argumentation. This analysis not only illuminates the power of rhetoric in shaping opinions but also emphasizes the need for a nuanced understanding of complex ethical issues in contemporary discourse.
References
- Rifkin, J. (2003) A Change of Heart about Animals. Los Angeles Times.
(Note: While the original publication details of Rifkin’s article are provided, a direct and verified URL to the specific source page could not be confidently included due to potential access restrictions or changes in web hosting. Additional academic sources beyond the primary text were not incorporated as the essay focuses on a direct rhetorical analysis of Rifkin’s work, and the scope of a 2:2 standard does not necessitate extensive external referencing beyond the primary material. If further sources are required for a higher standard, they can be explored in broader academic databases or library resources.)

