Introduction
The United States has long upheld a cultural myth that education serves as a great equaliser, promising empowerment and social mobility to all who pursue it diligently. This belief posits that through hard work and access to schooling, individuals can overcome socioeconomic barriers and achieve success, regardless of their background. However, this narrative often overlooks systemic inequalities that hinder marginalised groups, particularly African Americans, from realising these promises. In Sy Stokes’ spoken-word piece “The Black Bruins,” delivered in 2013 at the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA), the speaker interrogates this myth by highlighting racial disparities in higher education. This essay analyses how Stokes employs rhetoric to challenge foundational US beliefs about the educational system, focusing on the appeal to pathos. By selecting pathos as the primary appeal, the analysis will explore two key rhetorical devices—anaphora and metaphor—used to evoke emotional responses and underscore systemic failures. The thesis argues that through pathos, built on anaphora and metaphor, Stokes persuades his audience to recognise and confront the institutional racism embedded in American education, thereby disrupting the myth of equitable empowerment. This examination draws on assigned readings from Unit 2, including explanations of the education myth, social class dynamics, and rhetorical techniques, to provide context and support.
The US Cultural Myth of Education and Empowerment
The cultural myth of education and empowerment in the US suggests that schooling is a meritocratic pathway to success, where individual effort determines outcomes. As discussed in “Learning Power: The Myth of Education and Empowerment,” this myth perpetuates the idea that education liberates individuals from poverty and discrimination, ignoring how structural factors like race and class limit access and opportunities (Author, Year). For instance, the text argues that education often reinforces existing power structures rather than dismantling them, a point that resonates with Stokes’ critique. Stokes interrogates this myth by exposing how UCLA, a prestigious institution, fails African American students, thereby challenging the assumption that higher education is inherently empowering.
Furthermore, “From Social Class and the Hidden Curriculum of Work” illustrates how educational systems reproduce social inequalities through hidden curricula that favour affluent students (Anyon, 1980). Anyon explains that working-class and minority students receive an education emphasising obedience over critical thinking, which aligns with Stokes’ portrayal of African American males being valued primarily as athletes rather than scholars. This hidden curriculum perpetuates the myth by masking disparities, making success appear attainable while systemic barriers persist. Stokes indirectly critiques this by highlighting statistics on enrollment and graduation rates, urging audiences to question why the system fails to empower all students equally. By interrogating these beliefs, Stokes aims to provoke a reevaluation of education’s role in society, emphasising that true empowerment requires addressing racial injustices.
Overview of “The Black Bruins” and Its Context
“The Black Bruins” is a spoken-word performance by Sy Stokes, a UCLA student and activist, presented in a video format in 2013. The piece addresses the underrepresentation and exploitation of African American male students at UCLA, using statistics, personal anecdotes, and vivid imagery to critique the university’s priorities. Stokes begins with enrollment figures, noting that African American males constitute only 3.3% of the student body, with a significant portion being athletes. He then transitions to metaphors about race and colour, drawing parallels to systemic exclusion, and culminates in a call to action against institutional racism.
The context of the piece is rooted in ongoing debates about affirmative action and diversity in higher education, particularly following controversies at UCLA around admissions policies. Stokes’ work emerged amid discussions on racial equity, making it a timely intervention. As a core text for this analysis, it exemplifies how rhetoric can interrogate educational myths by blending factual data with emotional appeals, encouraging viewers to see beyond surface-level diversity claims.
Audience and Purpose
Stokes’ intended audience appears to be a mix of UCLA students, administrators, and the broader public interested in social justice, as evidenced by the video’s publication on platforms like YouTube and its circulation among activist communities. Clues in the text, such as direct references to UCLA’s Dean and professor (e.g., “Duty Olean Dean of Anderson School of Management” and “professor Sander”), suggest an address to university insiders who might influence policy. The spoken-word style, with its rhythmic delivery and performative elements, indicates an appeal to younger, diverse audiences familiar with hip-hop and poetry slams, who may be sympathetic to racial justice issues.
The purpose is multifaceted: to raise awareness about racial disparities, foster empathy for affected students, and incite behavioural changes, such as advocating for better financial aid and admissions reforms. Stokes wants his audience to shift attitudes from complacency to activism, challenging them to reject the myth that education is equitable. For example, by questioning why “we have more national championships than we do black male freshmen,” he urges viewers to prioritise human dignity over institutional prestige, ultimately aiming for a broader understanding of systemic racism in education.
Focus on Pathos as the Rhetorical Appeal
In rhetorical analysis, pathos refers to the appeal to emotions, designed to evoke feelings like anger, sympathy, or urgency in the audience. According to “How to Use Rhetoric to Get What You Want,” pathos is effective when speakers connect personally with listeners, using emotional language to persuade (Langston, Year). Stokes primarily relies on pathos to interrogate the education myth, stirring indignation about racial injustices rather than relying solely on logical arguments or credibility. While ethos (through his status as a UCLA student) and logos (via statistics) are present, pathos dominates by humanising the data and making abstract inequalities feel immediate and painful.
This appeal is crucial for challenging cultural beliefs, as it moves audiences beyond intellectual assent to emotional investment. “Tap into the Power to Persuade by Using These 6 Techniques of Clear and Compelling Speech” notes that emotional appeals can motivate action by creating a sense of shared humanity (Author, Year). In “The Black Bruins,” pathos helps dismantle the empowerment myth by evoking frustration over unfulfilled promises, encouraging listeners to empathise with marginalised students and question the system’s fairness.
Rhetorical Devices Building Pathos: Anaphora and Metaphor
Stokes employs specific rhetorical devices to construct pathos, enhancing the emotional impact of his message. “Rhetorical Devices for Speeches” defines anaphora as the repetition of words or phrases at the beginning of successive clauses, which builds rhythm and emphasis, often heightening emotional intensity (Author, Year). In “The Black Bruins,” Stokes uses anaphora in the repeated phrase “you tell me I should be proud to be a Bruin,” which appears multiple times to contrast institutional pride with harsh realities. For example, “you tell me I should be proud to be a UCLA when only 35 of us are predicted to walk across that stage” and later repetitions underscore hypocrisy. This is an instance of anaphora because the phrase is reiterated for cumulative effect, creating a rhythmic build-up that evokes anger and disillusionment. It bolsters pathos by making the audience feel the repetitive injustice, as if personally confronted, thus interrogating the myth by emotionally exposing education’s failures.
Another device is metaphor, which “Rhetorical Devices for Speeches” describes as a figure of speech comparing two unlike things to reveal deeper truths, often stirring emotions through vivid imagery (Author, Year). Stokes’ paintbrush metaphor illustrates racial dynamics: “white mixed with anything makes it brighter but we wouldn’t dare mix anything with brown or black or else our entire creation will be ruined.” Here, colours symbolise racial hierarchies, with dark shades representing marginalised groups relegated to the “untouched dark section of the paintbrush palette.” This exemplifies metaphor by implicitly comparing societal exclusion to artistic processes, without using “like” or “as.” It fosters pathos by evoking sadness and injustice, highlighting how African Americans are “used only to write words that were dark enough to be noticed on a white background.” Through this, Stokes emotionally critiques the education myth, showing how the system devalues Black contributions, prompting audiences to feel the pain of systemic erasure.
These devices, anaphora and metaphor, work synergistically to create pathos, as explained in “How to Use Rhetoric to Get What You Want,” where combining repetition and imagery amplifies emotional resonance (Langston, Year). By doing so, Stokes not only defines the problem but illustrates its human cost, challenging US beliefs about educational equity.
Conclusion
In summary, Sy Stokes’ “The Black Bruins” effectively uses rhetoric, centred on pathos, to interrogate the US myth of education as an empowering force. Through anaphora and metaphor, Stokes evokes strong emotions that expose racial disparities at UCLA, urging audiences to reconsider systemic inequalities. This analysis, supported by Unit 2 readings, demonstrates how such rhetorical strategies can challenge entrenched cultural beliefs, potentially inspiring reforms in higher education. Ultimately, Stokes’ work implies that true empowerment requires dismantling institutional racism, offering a critical lens for future discussions on educational justice. By highlighting these elements, the piece encourages ongoing interrogation of systems that promise much but deliver little to marginalised communities.
References
- Anyon, J. (1980) Social Class and the Hidden Curriculum of Work. Journal of Education, 162(1), pp. 67-92.
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